Embroidered Heart

Embroidered Heart

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Lovely fields of vision seen in all the days of you. Sewn gently in the heart of hearts with silken threads of blue..........

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Lovely fields of vision seen

In all the days of you
Sewn gently in the heart of hearts
With silken threads of blue

Embroidered in the sky by stars
Drifting as to the sea
Stitched in love by the hand of time
Forever yours to be

Memories sweet, a picture there
Of love I have for you
Held in place by knots of love
Forever to hold true

Framed in love in the finest gold
Caught up in eternity
To stand in halls of love divine
For all the world to see

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist* Anne Farrall DoyleThe-Red-Shawl

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This has an awesome flow...nice work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is sublime
Smile

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful flow and the rhyme scheme just flows out so naturally--always a treat to read your work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you always have the most beautiful pictures, to go with the sweet flow that I have come to love so much from you....

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Reall nice analogy!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very romantic and beautiful poem. "Embroidered in the sky by stars," such a lovely way to view love and time.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful Title, wonderful written poem - I love that last stanza...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, Neva! I come back and I see you have so many new pieces for me to read :)
This one is so sweet and smooth; I know that takes time and just the right mood to be able to write something so tender. You have created a dreamy beginning that takes you through clear to the end. I see no ways of improving because every stanza is perfection.
Simply wonderful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is such a beautiful poetic painting that reaches out to the reader. "Sewn gently in the heart of hearts With silken threads of blue" Wonderful work..xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know they are not, but most of your poems read as though they are just for me.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 3, 2011
Last Updated on November 3, 2011
Tags: heart, thread, embroidery, skies, blue, halls, frame, love

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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