Embroidered Heart

Lovely fields of vision seen
In all the days of you
Sewn gently in the heart of hearts
With silken threads of blue

Embroidered in the sky by stars
Drifting as to the sea
Stitched in love by the hand of time
Forever yours to be

Memories sweet, a picture there
Of love I have for you
Held in place by knots of love
Forever to hold true

Framed in love in the finest gold
Caught up in eternity
To stand in halls of love divine
For all the world to see

Author's Note

Artist* Anne Farrall DoyleThe-Red-Shawl

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Flow is brilliant....each stanza perfect...and finale too
" Framed in love in the finest gold
Caught up in eternity
To stand in halls of love divine
For all the world to see"

[Lily Mae]

I love the words.. "held in place by knots of love"... I could envision their journey and the lessons in each knot...excellent Neva..xx

[∂αʌ<..]

you actually sewed a whole new kind of poetic creativity through this!
marvellous! :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

112 syllables of brilliance.

[Margarette]

I never get tired of reading love poems since these writings are more genuine than the ones we see on television. The true feelings of a person are really felt through words. The way he say it, render it to his loved one and the love he is conveying are precious memories. This fascinating poem shows it all. I like reading this.

[Inyourshadow]

A love poem that speaks like cold winter nights when loved ones would sit stitching blankets from pieces if special material, also got to say I could almost hear Dolly Parton singing My coat of many colors as that like this speaks of each stitch bring done with love. The essential qualities of romance clearly shown in each and every line a love fully displayed for all to see unashamedly. You give voice to your heart so easily my friend. Keep em' coming

[Ruth]

This is so beautiful Neva..you always inspire me. This is more than love..this is all and in-between..a dance in flames and ice to cool! This is a dedicational piece of immense proportion! Wonderful xoxo