Let Us Always

Let Us Always

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Let us allow our fingers to run away into the clear waters of the language of our hearts..........

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Let us not care when our lips rain sounds
that revolve around dreams
where our strength
requires effort in saying
I love you.

In those times when our faces prepare
for answers when we are all alone
let us somehow
be brought together,
holding hands, down on our knees.

Let us allow our fingers to run away
into the clear waters
of the language of our hearts
until we are lifted up
and refreshed anew.

Let our hearts always skip a beat
at the sight of the other
and our bodies
sway towards one another to bring
comfort into our lives.

Let us always dry each other's tears
and send the pain
we see in the other's eyes
into the arms that wait
to crush its very air.


© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist *Pavel Bergr

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Oh my the last stanza is a killer, crush the very air - this adds a pain to the ending for those that have yet to taste the truth of love, not the phyiscal touch but more the mental inner comfort that when two hearts attuned can speak to one another with just a glance or gesture.
Beautifully penned, keep em coming

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Beautiful and how amazing it would be to be assembled into one to ride through these rollercoasters!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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... send the pain
we see in the other's eyes
into the arms that wait
to crush its very air.

absolutely absolute.. care.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Let our hearts always skip a beat , at the sight of the other, NICE LINES

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Magical writing that one aspires to write.....terific read :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Your words....are like the life-lines, that adorn a writers hands ...it shares a story that makes the reader yearn for more of your beauty.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, very well written beautiful piece. Very sensual and romantic.

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Added on December 5, 2011
Last Updated on December 5, 2011
Tags: lips, rain, sounds, dream, love, faces, answers

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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