Keen

Keen

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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An older one of mine written in 20l0 poking fun at myself.......

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There once was a poetess with a thesaurus

As big as the Adriatic Sea
She hunted down words in her book so absurd
Then tortured the world with these

She wrote lavish poems about simple drivel
Using words unknown to you and me
Inspissating her plots so we would think she was not
The hare-brain her friends knew her to be

A plethora of words she abused along with our minds
As she wrote of the redolent roses
Why could she not say how sweet they smelled
Before she beleaguered all of our noses

Now her poems are a panoply of quintessential bliss
If you have any idea what that means
I surely do not and have no intent of learning
So for now I will say she is keen

© 2012 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Poking a bit of fun at myself......

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This is beautiful, as you are. Through the time of life and the experience, we shall die someday as wise as we can. And grateful. Your writing always inspires me sweet sister. As life is a learning process, in all ways. As long as you write out of your heart, it's most precious, than out of rules. (my opinion) I loved this. X

Posted 9 Years Ago


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well this was hmorous one and pretty damn good too...I think it needs better scanning but that is just ME....Very good

Posted 8 Years Ago


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LOL you ARE keen, and witty, and a great writer. Oh, I must also throw in there a very attractive woman. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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LOLOLOLOL.... "Inspissating her plots so we would think she was not
The hare-brain her friends knew her to be"
You are funny and I didn't think that I would ever see this side of you Neva.

This was a pleasant delight to see. Loved it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

8 Years Ago

Thank you Maya. Oh yes I have one heck of a sense of humor. I love to make others laugh even if at.. read more
Just a bit of fun. And why not? If we can't do it to ourselves we leave to others who are perhaps a little more mean-spirited.
Made me smile anyroad.
ATB
Alex.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Well I"m glad you put away that damn thesaurus so I can get your meaning now ...chuckles

Posted 9 Years Ago


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when i want to read a good poem I no who to look for U

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Very clever!
And you're hot!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Haha. How fun!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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You poke away darlin'. Not only is it damn funny, but goes with a wonderful picture to. Both of them beautiful and fun. Damn. That was good

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think that many people actually feel this way and it is really no fault of your own. I have a read some of your poetry in the past and it is pretty visual; overall it is very well crafted. Although I know that it can be frustrating when one comes across something like this.

Or I just completely misread the poem and the underlying feelings in it. Either way, I like the sentiment you put forth here.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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