Love

Love

A Poem by Chaotica
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And, once again, for creative writing class.

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It's not the way you look at me
or the way your eyes could stop my heart...

It's not the shape of your lips,
or the way you say those three words...

It's not the smoothness of your skin,
the shivers running down my spine when I touch you...

It's not your shattered glass heart,
the one I long to put back together...

It's not the way you hold my hand,
or cuddle up against me...

It's not the sound of your laughter,
or the pain I feel when you cry...

It's not one specific thing,
it's all of these and more...

So if you ever wonder "why?",
this is all you need to know.

© 2009 Chaotica


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this was a great, great poem. I think one of the best romance poems I've read on here. ^_^ The emotion was deep and expressed well and it also flowed great. I was kept wondering about what was that one specific reason, but the ending was better than I expected, 'it's all of these and more'. Great piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I don't think anyone could find a better answer!!! Excellent work!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


WoW ... a very well written piece indeed !!!
I think you did answer the question quite well actually ...
No need for anything more ...
Perfect !!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Awwww !

You just kissed the question off to
someone else----Not me, I don`t know
what it is.

----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 15 Years Ago


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haha i loved this poem!

It really spoke to me... I liked it alot.

=]

keep up the good work... oh and review my writings if you can!

x

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the emotion in this, and the description of all those little things that make up love. Beautiful :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on January 21, 2009

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Chaotica
Chaotica

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