Too Late'

Too Late'

A Poem by Charliee

i'm taking my heart out
putting it into a box
i'm not going to have a doubt 
because it's going to be locked

nobody can have it
not even you
i'm not going to have anymore slits
because i'm finally through

i'm through with you
and i'm through with us
i'm no more stuck like glue
and you can't made a fuss

don't miss me
don't come running anymore
when your free
because i'm done with this war

open up your eyes
see this pain your causing
start being wise
and stop pausing

keep it walking
go straight
stop coming back knocking
because now its too late

your too late
because i'm gone
your not coming into my gate
i'm moving on


© 2013 Charliee


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the rhyming wasn't great but it sounds better then the last and at least theirs some rhyming in this one makes it sound more like a poem.
Some of the rhyming was good though this was better then the last.
Although the story line in the last i liked better.


Posted 10 Years Ago


You've got some great rhymes and rhythm going on here. It's easy to let one's self be pulled into a relationship and then quickly find out that it's wrong and will never work.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Charliee
Charliee

ghaziabad, utter pradesh, India



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I am a 15 year old boy i like to write but i know i might not be the best at it. But if you read my writing and you would like to say something about it then be honest about them:) more..

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A Poem by Charliee