Free Bird...

Free Bird...

A Poem by Quill~
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A prose~ For a sweet poet...

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He was born at sunrise
waiting for a soul connection
with flaming eyes wide open
lightning strikes a faceted prism...
earth trembling under his feet
a thunderstorm chasing her wings
his little bird took flight
spanning the horizon 
he followed her off the cliff
a newborn meeting the sky
a free bird...his life begins...

© 2013 Quill~


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A beautiful poem of first flight and growth. It was constructed flawlessly. I thank you for sharing it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quill~

7 Years Ago

:) thank you so much.
Bon soir, Madame...J'aime votre poeme. Elle est belle. En passant, j'adore la chanson 'sweater weather' sur votre page. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


¥ay $wagger

7 Years Ago

Free flows are the best because you capture your words in the height of expression...you feel your w.. read more
Quill~

7 Years Ago

all I can do is try. lol
thanks again. :)
¥ay $wagger

7 Years Ago

And try you must...it shall be. :)

You are most welcome, Quill...it was pleasure if min.. read more
~"he followed her off the cliff
a newborn meeting the sky
a free bird...his life begins..."~
(I Love This!!!~)
~you seem to become more creative
with every piece of poetry you write~ :))

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is a lovely piece, it's very sweet and warm...comforting. You have a nice tone to your writing, and it makes the reader feel it. Very well done. :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quill~

7 Years Ago

:) thank you muchly V!... so glad you felt the warmth here.
Very beautiful and delicate imagery. To me it seems to have an interesting twist by the ending. Very fine!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quill~

7 Years Ago

:) many thank yous Friday!
Beautiful, soaring words filled with sharp imagery. Just the stuff I like! Well done, Quill. Angi~

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quill~

7 Years Ago

:) thank you Angi!
a gem of poems. I read it and although I do not completely understand, it is in my ignorance I see a new bird flying free. well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quill~

7 Years Ago

:) it's how the reader envisions it.. much appreciated Tim!
I love the word choices. and it is a very calm, and peaceful poem. I needed that after reading all these crazy ones haha. Thank you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quill~

7 Years Ago

:) glad you found something calm. thank you!
I just played "Free Bird" for my son this week end. He loves guitar so the song was a hit with him.
You bring me back to a line or two in the music with your poem. I especially like, "with flaming eyes wide open lightning strikes a faceted prism..."

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quill~

7 Years Ago

:)) I love that song. thank you David!

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