Free Bird...

Free Bird...

A Poem by Quill~
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A prose~ For a sweet poet...

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He was born at sunrise
waiting for a soul connection
with flaming eyes wide open
lightning strikes a faceted prism...
earth trembling under his feet
a thunderstorm chasing her wings
his little bird took flight
spanning the horizon 
he followed her off the cliff
a newborn meeting the sky
a free bird...his life begins...

© 2013 Quill~


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Very beautiful, calm and serene I found this poem. new life is always a miracle. Very nice my friend.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quill~

7 Years Ago

:) thank you for your kind words Jack.
Very lovely image here, I can easily picture a soul soaring above the clouds.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Quill~

8 Years Ago

be sure to catch it when it flutters...:)
Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Or flirts :-)
Quill~

8 Years Ago

Ohhh yes... flirting it the best time to catch it! :)
Good to be a free bird. One of great songs also. I enjoyed the poem. The good description took me to good places and create good visions. I like the ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Quill~

8 Years Ago

It's great to be free. thank you for taking the time to read me Coyote...
much appreciated! :)
interesting how sometimes hooking up with someone who is so perfect for us can actually make us feel freer than we felt before.

really nice imagery in this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Quill~

8 Years Ago

:) thank you muchly!...it is a free feeling, most certainly!
I enjoy the feeling of transformation within this one.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Quill~

8 Years Ago

:) thank you muchly Pale!
I like the description as well

Posted 8 Years Ago


Quill~

8 Years Ago

:) glad you liked it!
Branching out looks great on you. Your attention to detail and profound ability to create perfect imagery carries over well here. So impressed with you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Quill~

8 Years Ago

:) your words mean a lot. thank you PRP!
This is really beautiful. I love the feelings of freedom and new life that you express here.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Quill~

8 Years Ago

:) thank you OBWhiteHawk.
This was great, you have some fabby lines! (: I truly loved it. Well done, Quill! Amazing

~ Noodle.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Quill~

8 Years Ago

awwww thanks Noodleeehead! :)
"Quill" Free and Bird need to be together, making Freebird you know Lynyrd Skynyrd, great guitar solo(s). What a beautiful image you have created, two love birds flying off into the sunset, lovers entwined.

Nice work Quill

Posted 8 Years Ago


Quill~

8 Years Ago

Freebird, or free bird...either way he's a free bird. ;)
thanks Leigh! x

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I'm a romantic at heart, here to express myself through my work...I write for me. I welcome others to read. I look forward to learning and sharing thoughts, through poetry and stories. :) Quill~ .. more..

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