Free Bird...

A prose~ For a sweet poet...

He was born at sunrise
waiting for a soul connection
with flaming eyes wide open
lightning strikes a faceted prism...
earth trembling under his feet
a thunderstorm chasing her wings
his little bird took flight
spanning the horizon 
he followed her off the cliff
a newborn meeting the sky
a free bird...his life begins...

Reviews

[Jack...]

Very beautiful, calm and serene I found this poem. new life is always a miracle. Very nice my friend.

[Quill~]

:) thank you for your kind words Jack.

[Frieda P]

Very lovely image here, I can easily picture a soul soaring above the clouds.

[Quill~]

:) thanks for your kind words Frieda!

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, I want to be a freebird. :-)

[Quill~]

me too! love birds, I want to be one! :)

[Frieda P]

Ha a free lovebird sounds good to me! :-)

[Quill~]

is love in the air?... I hope so! ;)

[Frieda P]

One never knows, we just keep breathing and wait to see what floats by. ;-)

[Quill~]

be sure to catch it when it flutters...:)

[Frieda P]

Or flirts :-)

[Quill~]

Ohhh yes... flirting it the best time to catch it! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to be a free bird. One of great songs also. I enjoyed the poem. The good description took me to good places and create good visions. I like the ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Quill~]

It's great to be free. thank you for taking the time to read me Coyote...
much appreciated! :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

interesting how sometimes hooking up with someone who is so perfect for us can actually make us feel freer than we felt before.

really nice imagery in this.

[Quill~]

:) thank you muchly!...it is a free feeling, most certainly!

[Bare trees]

I enjoy the feeling of transformation within this one.

[Quill~]

:) thank you muchly Pale!

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I like the description as well

[Quill~]

:) glad you liked it!

[End.]

Branching out looks great on you. Your attention to detail and profound ability to create perfect imagery carries over well here. So impressed with you.

[Quill~]

:) your words mean a lot. thank you PRP!

[OBWhiteHawk]

This is really beautiful. I love the feelings of freedom and new life that you express here.

[Quill~]

:) thank you OBWhiteHawk.

[s y e]

This was great, you have some fabby lines! (: I truly loved it. Well done, Quill! Amazing

~ Noodle.

[Quill~]

awwww thanks Noodleeehead! :)

[Leigh]

"Quill" Free and Bird need to be together, making Freebird you know Lynyrd Skynyrd, great guitar solo(s). What a beautiful image you have created, two love birds flying off into the sunset, lovers entwined.

Nice work Quill

[Quill~]

Freebird, or free bird...either way he's a free bird. ;)
thanks Leigh! x