Free Bird...

Free Bird...

A Poem by Quill~
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A prose~ For a sweet poet...

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He was born at sunrise
waiting for a soul connection
with flaming eyes wide open
lightning strikes a faceted prism...
earth trembling under his feet
a thunderstorm chasing her wings
his little bird took flight
spanning the horizon 
he followed her off the cliff
a newborn meeting the sky
a free bird...his life begins...

© 2013 Quill~


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Wonderful!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Quill~

8 Years Ago

:) thank you Shaun!
Shaun Payton

8 Years Ago

Welcome Quill:)
hmmmmmmmmmm i like how this was articulated it matched perfectly to the image giving above lovely write

Posted 8 Years Ago


Quill~

8 Years Ago

:) thank you for your kind words Peter.
Beautifully written and an excellent read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Quill~

8 Years Ago

:) thank you Brandon!
This poem spans the horizons of beauty...Well done...Bravo...:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Quill~

8 Years Ago

:) thank you Sami!
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)
Nicely done. The first flight, the first foray of independence. I admit to at first being confused when the gender changed in the sixth line but you tied it together nicely.
Perhaps I am engaging in over analysis [like that ever happens] but to me "his" leap of faith into the unknown [following her off the cliff] is not merely the first stretching of wings in independence but also the interdependence of finding, or at least pursuing, the "soul connection".

I enjoyed this one very much.

But based upon the title I did want to hold my cigarette lighter over my head and bob bck and forth.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Quill~

8 Years Ago

it means so much to have your feedback...you have become a great source of enlightenment, I am tryin.. read more
SteveB

8 Years Ago

If I am a source of enlightment then dear and gentle lady you are destined to stumnble in the dark.
Quill~

8 Years Ago

you don't give yourself enough credit...
(where credit is due)...you're awesome. :)
what a great write "Quill", loved this one and you really showed me a full movie of a bird who born and how to learn flying over the sky...that's really a great write. I'd made some views of a bird how he flies across the sky and how he takes his first flight.
this poem's nicely penned no doubt, it's short, smooth, nice and much beautiful write.100./100

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Quill~

8 Years Ago

:) thank you for your sweet review.
first flight is fight with yourself.... i think nature should not test you in that....it can smash you to pieces or you can take advantage of opposite winds and can fly high....:)
nice poem...

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Quill~

8 Years Ago

:) thanks K!
very lovely! poem and photo are both wonderful!

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Quill~

8 Years Ago

:) thank you Quinnfinn!
PLAY SOME SKYNARD!!!! Just kidding. Cute poem.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Quill~

8 Years Ago

:D you rock!..thanks BR.

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