Virtue...

Virtue...

A Poem by Quill~
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Fade into you...

"

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The pale moon hides,
as the morning peeks in
through her window,
like a silent wind,
he enters the room,

A warm breeze
caressing her skin,
whispering sweet,
sweet nothings as she dreams,
enticing her to spread her glory,

With tender adoration,
his feather touch
graces the crest,
of her succulent breast;

Overwhelmed by his thirst
to milk her desire,
he bestows a gift of gratitude
upon her fragrant flower;

The virginal spring awakens within,
her virtue, she willingly surrenders…

© 2013 Quill~


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Quill~

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You have a skill at slipping in soft words for raw ones while still keeping the intensity high. The pic is enough to drive a hot blooded man wild with passion. Wonderful erotic writing Quill.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quill~

7 Years Ago

:) thank you.... I'm happy you stopped by to read me.
Penned with a feathery lightness. Nice little tickle.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quill~

7 Years Ago

:) thank you darlin'.
Loved the wording, loved that touch of the brush your work always has, the music, for one reason or another came to this, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xrd3lSn5FqQ&feature=share&list=FLJ5MHcc3JVk3GmsugG4dYNg



Loved this, but the gray cells brought me to Micheal

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quill~

7 Years Ago

:) thank you muchly!
Teasing is torture...glad I'm a sadist. Excellent!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quill~

7 Years Ago

:) thank you!...good to know. ;)
Very yummy, torture to a starving man.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quill~

7 Years Ago

:) love your comment, thanks!
Very sensual, Quill. Quite the sexy picture.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quill~

7 Years Ago

:) thank you kindly!
OMG I love Mazzy Star. Beautiful poem Quill. I'd like to think Hope Sandoval would like it

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quill~

7 Years Ago

:) thank you!
Very interesting poetry here. very sensual, very intimate and very good.

Trace

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quill~

7 Years Ago

:) thanks for the nice review.
Your words of tender erotic beauty paint a picture of love and lust that is a masterpiece

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quill~

7 Years Ago

:) thanks so much!
Beautiful and tender words leading the reader to good places. Photo gave life to the poem. Private rooms allow us to be nude and without fear to separate passion and love. No weakness in the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quill~

7 Years Ago

:) thank you for the sweet comment.

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I'm a romantic at heart, here to express myself through my work...I write for me. I welcome others to read. I look forward to learning and sharing thoughts, through poetry and stories. :) Quill~ .. more..

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