The One...

The One...

A Poem by Quill~
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~Wish~

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I wish to ignore the noisy confusion of the stars,
To flounder in the depths of his universe, unnoticed;
To taste the tears on my lover's lips,
and lick the salt of his sorrow...
To give strength to the walls of devotion,
and beat strong in my lover's heart...

~A thousand times bursting~
I will be the one to steal his breath...

© 2014 Quill~


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Short & sweet, this lovers poem is perfect for Valentines day. I especially like that this sounds unique, not like the other ten million love poems. I read sorrow & love intertwined here. Very nice imagery.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Powerful and beautiful use of words.
"~A thousand times bursting~
I will be the one to steal his breath..."
I liked the above lines a lot. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote





Posted 6 Years Ago


Very sensual, as always. He's a lucky man to have your devotion.

Posted 6 Years Ago


OMG OMG wowwwwwww....... :)
thank you,,

Posted 6 Years Ago


Punchy and powerful. I like the way you block out the world to concentrate on your love.

'The noisy confusion of the stars' I take to mean the problems and headaches of the world around you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Short but brilliant. Beautifully penned. I love it!
-QuanaWana

Posted 6 Years Ago


The poem can be about a girl that plays her cards by using reverse psychology to reach, alter and ignite her interested person insigths of desire while giving her the uncluttered formula to repeat it and dominate at her will without hurting herself through shattered glass

Posted 6 Years Ago


Short but powerful. I really like this poem. great work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Quill~

6 Years Ago

:) thanks Jessica! :)
that was amazing!!!! i really enjoyed it :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Justin

6 Years Ago

yea same here lol :P
Justin

6 Years Ago

yea same here lol :P
Quill~

6 Years Ago

good to know. lol :P
Absolutely beautiful!

:) Julie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Quill~

6 Years Ago

:) thank you! :)

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