Hate Me

Written from struggle. It's about having a self esteem so low, all the insults are just a repeat of what you've told yourself

Hate Me

Chaz Hemsworth

 

Go ahead.

laugh.

I've already heard it.

 

Go ahead.

Call me stupid,

a failure,

I've already heard it.

 

Go ahead.

Tell me you hate me.

I've already told it to myself.

Reviews

[Rogie-Dodge]

I can very much identify with this, having depression myself.

Remember though, thoughts are just thoughts. They aren't your enemies, but they aren't your friends. They may sound convincing, but they aren't always the truth. Your emotions and thoughts feed off each other and can devour your soul if you let them.

You might appreciate one of my poems perhaps ... Dark Wolves.
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/roger_onslow/1304775/

[Ren Grace]

Your poem is very relatable to many readers. I know exactly what it feels like to be laughed at and it's not an enjoying experience. Whether this is based on a true feeling of yours or just an idea, I hope whatever may have made you feel this way is out of your life. You are a great writer :)

[cycy]

I'm sure we can all relate to this one Chaz, at some point we have all had that moment when we tell it to our self, very direct and emotional too, it's like you just poured out the words from within, i love them raw hey. well written :)

[Average person]

Relate well.. actually I relate more than I care to admit :/ but a great write nevertheless!

[Linda alexander]

Go ahead.
Call me stupid,
a failure,
I've already heard it.

Go ahead.
Tell me you hate me.
I've already told it to myself.
Poem succeeded fully in expressing feeling one some one with low self esteem, one can visualize that person through this poem, that is with respect to poetry, in day to day life based on personal belief from childhood, there is no room for low esteem for humans created in HIS IMAGE, people differ in opinions, that is my humble perspective

[a schizophrenic writer]

"tell me you hate me.
I've already told it to myself."
I personally suffer from low self esteem and I think this is a great way to describe it. Very good write.