Thoughts and Feelings

Thoughts and Feelings

A Poem by Cheerio
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I wrote this about my friend kurtis. I tryed to portray the picture of a girl who is in love but then she misunderstands and is quick to jump to conclusions.

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My feelings are hurt, and my thoughts are askew.

I lost myself in you, now my heart is torn in two.

My face wets like morning dew, as I watch her flirt with you.

You kiss her, I whisper.

She smiles, I fade away.

You see me and call my name, I hear you but walk away.

You call and leave messages, I delete them without giving them a try.

I  go out with my friends, you're there.

My eyes fill with tears, you hug me close.

You kiss me, I whisper.

You tell me she was your sister, I cry harder 'cuz it was so damn hard to be without you.

© 2009 Cheerio


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i think this is my fav poem out of all of them i really like this one

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Cheerio
Cheerio

Puyallup, WA



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So i love dogs! My bestie is kurtis but Larrinda is pretty damn cool! My life is great. I fake a smile on days im not okay and smile on days i am okay. people don't really know that I'm easily.. more..

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