Whisper

Whisper

A Poem by Chellie
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Whisper to me. A slight erotic write.

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Whisper to me in the dark

Kiss me softly in the park

Tangle your hands in my hair

Trace your fingers everywhere

 

Run your tongue along my jaw

My body responds to you with awe

Place your hips against mine

Let our bodies intertwine

 

Move in and out, oh so slow

As my pleasure begins to grow

Lift your hands to cup my face

While we make love in this empty place

 

Whisper words of love to me

As we sit under the old oak tree

Entangled hands at our side

The love we share will not be denied



© 2012 Chellie


Author's Note

Chellie
So this is the first thing I have uploaded in quite some time now. I feel bad that I haven't been on here much in the last few months. To put it quite simply during the week I am slightly depressed and the weekends are filled with love and romance from my wonderful boyfriend. The week goes by slow and are filled with depressing events and life. I have been unable to find a job in over seven months and its taking its toll on me. So I have not been in the right mind set or mood to write, but I am trying to write myself out of that now, if that makes any since whatsoever.

So I hope that you all enjoy this piece. It took me a while to get the wording just right and the feelings to really show in this. I feel like it needs to be longer. I will probably add more on to it. But for now it is done and this is the end result.

Let me know what you think of it please. Thanks everyone.

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Short and sweet and very very romantic.
I enjoyed this peace.... i love the way it rhymes to :)
All goes together quite nicely :)
Great write i enjoyed it.
Im sorry about whats been going on in your life, but im guessing by the comments from a year ago that things are better by now, i surly hope.
Congratulations on placing in my contest!


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chellie

6 Years Ago

Thank you kindly for the lovely review. And yes, things are much better now than back then. It was a.. read more
cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Years Ago

Your most welcome, im so glad to here that :)
Thats always great im glad you did :)
HAHA.. read more



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This piece is a real joy to read. Beautifully written. I love the way it flows.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chellie

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Short and sweet and very very romantic.
I enjoyed this peace.... i love the way it rhymes to :)
All goes together quite nicely :)
Great write i enjoyed it.
Im sorry about whats been going on in your life, but im guessing by the comments from a year ago that things are better by now, i surly hope.
Congratulations on placing in my contest!


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chellie

6 Years Ago

Thank you kindly for the lovely review. And yes, things are much better now than back then. It was a.. read more
cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Years Ago

Your most welcome, im so glad to here that :)
Thats always great im glad you did :)
HAHA.. read more
Beautiful, and sensuous.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful descriptions. Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The poem flows beautifully, with a beguliong rhythm and gentle delight in the pleasure of love... It has a deeply romantic feel to it and feels like lips that press and caress, like fingers that gently explore and adore... It sent a sparkle down my spine...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful poem of desire. Good to be open to touch and kind emotion. Make us feel alive and strong. No weakness in the poem. Nice flow of thoughts and a very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 12, 2012
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Tags: erotica, sex, love, romance, kiss, park, whisper

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