Far Upon the Sea

Far Upon the Sea

A Poem by Fabian G. Franklin
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I dream the heartbeat of salty tides;

And golden moons upon the sand;

The rush of white-capped waves

Around me

Whispering songs I understand

 

Weathered hull and prow before us

In gray barnacled planks, adorned

Great blue sailfish go exploring

Before our ship, around the horn

 

I dream the lonely sound of seabirds;

Screech of gull and cry of tern;

Billowed sails, full with yearning

To catch the wind

And  secrets learn

 

Coconut palms on distant islands

Pristine beaches beyond the reef

Sands snow white, bathed in light

Like some treasure, beyond belief

 

I dream the  lullaby of Humpbacks

Where they part the frothy veil

How I long to join in with them

Learning all the songs of whales

 

Around the arctic icebergs wander

To see the seals and  penguins there

What would it be like I ponder,

To pet a friendly polar bear?

 

Upon my travels I go dreaming

Of all these things that will never be

Yet fill my mind with imaginings

And longing far upon the sea

© 2019 Fabian G. Franklin


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I join this voice in its longing for the sea. It sounds like an old, landlocked sailor, desirous of salt and sails once more. Believe me, I can relate. Best to keep the white bears at a distance, methinks. A very fine piece of writing.

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Fabian G. Franklin

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Thanks Sam. Those big bears are pretty unfriendly. ;) It would still be cool to pet one if one could.. read more

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