Some Kind of Beautiful

Some Kind of Beautiful

A Poem by Fabian G. Franklin
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A Wedding Day Poem

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It's some kind of beautiful

The way that you smile

Some kind of wonderful

That just drives me wild

 

So much that I could say

That you've never heard

But you take my breath away

And I choke on my words

 

I just want you to know

That I love you so much

There's some kind of magic

In the way that we touch

 

It's some kind of beautiful

Like the flowers of spring

But I look at you and then

I can't say a thing

 

It's some kind of beautiful

This feeling inside

As I stand to take your hand

And make you my bride

 

You look at me and smile

And the world fades away

I can barely say 'I do'

But I do all the way

 

This is...

Some kind of beautiful day

© 2019 Fabian G. Franklin


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Man, this is really nice. Incredibly nice! Neat like a smooth whiskey on a joyous day. I like the tight stanzas and great rhymes and half rhymes. It rolls like a good song everyone remembers. Good stuff by you. Have a great day, sir.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem is simply beautiful. I great way to describe your wedding day. Well done here.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

' .. So much that I could say - That you've never heard - But you take my breath away - And I choke on my words.. '

Oh Fabian, like your poem, this too is beautiful! You've written what every woman would love to have said on her wedding day, it's as sincere, sensitive, and, so much more.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Fabian G. Franklin

1 Week Ago

Thank you my friend. I appreciate your taking the time to read and your kind words. Bless.
emmajoy

1 Week Ago

Such beautiful words deserve more ...
this is some kind of beautiful expression of love...
to barely be able to speak the words...as the feelings gush...
j.

Posted 1 Week Ago


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Fabian G. Franklin

1 Week Ago

Thanks so much for reading my friend. Bless.
Such beauty in the words that can hardly be spoken. This is like a song of spring … a new beginning, a beautiful day.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fabian G. Franklin

1 Week Ago

Thank you for reading. I appreciate your thoughts. Bless.

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Fabian G. Franklin
Fabian G. Franklin

Boone, NC



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