Miles

Miles

A Poem by Cherrie Palmer
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love note

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It is true we have traveled some miles

On this road of life.

Always, with forever insight.

We have weathered all of life’s storms

And shared secret dreams and hopes

Whether the road is rocky or smooth

I have just what I need when I’m with you

So kiss me my dear on this day that we wed

And let’s do it all over again.

© 2015 Cherrie Palmer


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Aw, How beautiful and endearing, Cherrie!

I hope this is for your own anniversary, and that it is your mate to whom you've penned it in such a sweetly elegant voice … I love the imagery and sensations you've flowed all through my senses.

Warmest thanks, and a bushel of hugs for sharing this most excellent piece from your amazing heart, M'Lady! ⁓ Richard

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie Palmer

8 Years Ago

It was for our anniversary. Matt has had many a poem forced upon him :) through the year.
Richard🖌

8 Years Ago

LOL!
He must be very happy.



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This poem stood out for me. The atmosphere is safe and calming. I can almost feel sunshine on my face as I read it! Great work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful words and tribute to a long and unending love between two lovers. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aw, How beautiful and endearing, Cherrie!

I hope this is for your own anniversary, and that it is your mate to whom you've penned it in such a sweetly elegant voice … I love the imagery and sensations you've flowed all through my senses.

Warmest thanks, and a bushel of hugs for sharing this most excellent piece from your amazing heart, M'Lady! ⁓ Richard

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie Palmer

8 Years Ago

It was for our anniversary. Matt has had many a poem forced upon him :) through the year.
Richard🖌

8 Years Ago

LOL!
He must be very happy.
Beautifully captured. It reads so soft and full of longing. The eagerness to do it all again shows that you were doing something right to begin with. Great write, thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie Palmer

8 Years Ago

:) thank you
alifeacoustic

8 Years Ago

You're very welcome.
So sweet I wish I had written it for my wife!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie Palmer

8 Years Ago

thank you Dave
Cherrie Palmer

8 Years Ago

and re pin it I don't mind.
Until you mentioned a kiss, I thought this love letter might have been for that marvelous old Studebaker pickup. (Pretty sure it's a Studebaker, at least) Oh, well--either way, it's lovely.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cherrie Palmer

8 Years Ago

I so want one
reminds me of a Beach Boys' song..."let's get back together and do it again"
i like rebirth of love after a rocky road, as love usually is...but this shows the willingness to struggle over the bad spots to get to the good...i really like this piece.

read the sixth line as "whether the road is..."

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie Palmer

8 Years Ago

Ha! what a dork I hate when I do that. thank you Jacob so very much :)
Again you capture the beauty of a long and lasting love with a lot of miles traveled. You become 'compagnons de route' as we say in Belgium.

Well done.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Cherrie Palmer
Cherrie Palmer

Oakland, AR



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I am a published poet and love poetry. I live near the White River, and love trout fishing. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: Obsession Starts.. more..

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