Fire on the Horizon
A Book by Cherrie Palmer
 An angel opens a woman's eyes and her vision leads to a family in need  © 2018 Cherrie Palmer
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this started as the quest
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It's a very intriguing and entertaining book with some elements of mysticism in there. I like that. Also your skill in character development is very impressive. I feel like I got know each one of them personally. Each chapter got me at every line and ends with the right amount of suspense that had me wanting more. Never a dull moment, which is important for me cuz I loose interest in a story quite easily. This definitely has the juice.
Unfortunately I don't think i have the expertise to give an in-depth critique on what can be improved, if that is what you're expecting from your readers. If in the future you feel it can be improved in anyway then I look forward to see what you come up with. Otherwise it's a thorough job well done in my opinion. Hope you stay inspired. I look forward to reading more stories from you.
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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6 Years Ago
I'm back again lol. I just have to add that the theme of the book itself is a powerful one. A Woman .. read moreI'm back again lol. I just have to add that the theme of the book itself is a powerful one. A Woman on a quest to save a family she has never met from danger, putting her own life at risk. This is a true heroic and selfless act of love. I'm really moved by the essence of this story.
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6 Years Ago
Thank you Remi I'm trying to decide if I'm going to write on or lay her to rest :)
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6 Years Ago
Thank you Remi I'm trying to decide if I'm going to write on or lay her to rest :)
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It's a very intriguing and entertaining book with some elements of mysticism in there. I like that. Also your skill in character development is very impressive. I feel like I got know each one of them personally. Each chapter got me at every line and ends with the right amount of suspense that had me wanting more. Never a dull moment, which is important for me cuz I loose interest in a story quite easily. This definitely has the juice.
Unfortunately I don't think i have the expertise to give an in-depth critique on what can be improved, if that is what you're expecting from your readers. If in the future you feel it can be improved in anyway then I look forward to see what you come up with. Otherwise it's a thorough job well done in my opinion. Hope you stay inspired. I look forward to reading more stories from you.
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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6 Years Ago
I'm back again lol. I just have to add that the theme of the book itself is a powerful one. A Woman .. read moreI'm back again lol. I just have to add that the theme of the book itself is a powerful one. A Woman on a quest to save a family she has never met from danger, putting her own life at risk. This is a true heroic and selfless act of love. I'm really moved by the essence of this story.
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6 Years Ago
Thank you Remi I'm trying to decide if I'm going to write on or lay her to rest :)
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6 Years Ago
Thank you Remi I'm trying to decide if I'm going to write on or lay her to rest :)
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Author
Cherrie PalmerOakland, AR
About
I am a published poet and love poetry. I live near the White River, and love trout fishing. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: Obsession Starts.. more..
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