Mornings Secret

Mornings Secret

A Poem by Cherrie Palmer
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The sunrise

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What secret
did the wind just share
to make the sun
blush so sweetly.

© 2019 Cherrie Palmer


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Ahhh, Cherrie!
Loving in the warmth of sunrise ⁓ what could be sweeter!

One never knows what a conspiring wind and sun will come up with, but it's sure to be something beautiful … just like your delightful Free Verse poem.
I like the flow of this, the creatively original imagery, and gently suggestive thought it invokes.
For softer, more proper grammatical appeal, consider ending with the action adverb "sweetly", rather than with the adjective "sweet … ie: "to make the sun blush so sweetly".

Whatever, I'm (obviously) smitten! ⁓ Richard ; )

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

Ya know Richard, I tried it both ways and need to look at it once again.
:) and thank you.. read more
Richard 🍃

1 Year Ago

I am always happy to read your poetry, Cherrie … you're such a gentle joy! : )



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clever, effective personification. sunrise is such a special time. made me smile ... :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Pete so much. I like to do that when I write. Helps connect us with the moment in a fresh.. read more
Cherrie... the wind can be gentle and tickle our fancy.
Your talent shines through like blooms bursting in spring.
truly, Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

If that means I'm full of it I agree:)
All kidding aside thank you Pat your reviews are like .. read more
Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

You are a deer... love those little rhymes!
certainly nothing to compare with morns sunlight

Posted 1 Year Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

Ya know I always think that until it sets in a brilliantly blaze.
john l smith

1 Year Ago

yes, sunsets can be extremely beautiful, all the colors, like an artists rendition
Nice! Charming, but it makes me think beyond the charm . . . What secrets does nature share only among themselves . . . an insider's secret.
T.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

They must have some real doozies.
This short-and-sweet poem suggests that painful brevity of a spectacular dawn moment. Things in life that are momentary can often provoke a continuing stream of thoughts & observations, just like your poem does (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

I'm glad to hear that inner work is very rewarding. Unlike painting . I've spent a hour looking for .. read more
barleygirl

1 Year Ago

Painting! Sounds fun! (kidding) After the uncommon rain this winter, now I've got the big weed-whack.. read more
Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

Man, I need to hit the garden as well.
Maybe next week. Lol
P.s. I wonder if that old wind said if I can make you blush will you make me a tequila sunrise

Posted 1 Year Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

Lol, I hope so what a springtime shower that would be.
Many things are said to come upon the wind including this delicate poem that's gracious

Posted 1 Year Ago


Minimal words,yet carrying a deep meaning 😊

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

Thank you Muskan.
The idea just hit me as I watched the sky change colors.
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Minimalist gem.
A unique and lovely perspective, Cherrie.



Posted 1 Year Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

Good morning Jim and thank you
Hmmmm- those morning secrets that can be so very sweet...🌹

Posted 1 Year Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

:) thank you, and good morning

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Cherrie Palmer
Cherrie Palmer

Oakland, AR



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I am a published poet and love poetry. My husband and I live near the White River, and love trout fishing. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: O.. more..

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