Three Bad Guns

Three Bad Guns

A Poem by Cherrie Palmer
"

a 3 minute western

"

Arizona sun bakes hard the dust


While three bad guns create a fuss


People hide running scared


For in this sleepy place their kind is rare


Word travels fast down the street


Three bad guns are here for me.


I pin my star, tie down cast iron


To pull their teeth and send them ride'n


Their game of fun ends in death,


I spy the sheriff lying dead,


They play for blood,


 not for jest,


 I meet their terms,


their middleman now dead


A tumble weed tumbles by,


The remaining two run to hide


They curse my name and threaten me


 I take aim, and again they lose one  from the  three.


One man left he's a fast outlaw


He claims the street 


so we can draw


With three long strides 


I match his stance


Two .44s rip from leather


but my hand  just a little faster


Now outlaws three 


all lay dead


And on more time


I must bury 


my 


past.

© 2019 Cherrie Palmer


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

I love this. The dust, the heat, the climax. A western of any length is usually good for me, but this 3 minute one is a stroke of genius. Yeah baby!!!!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

5 Months Ago

Thank you, I love when I can see a full event in a handful of words, and westerns were one of the f.. read more
That's a pretty good telling of the wild west in its prime. Much enjoyed. Tip my hat to ya.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

5 Months Ago

Thank you, I like a good western as well.
I really enjoy the old western theme which this captures very nicely
Howdee to yuh

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 6 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

6 Months Ago

Sometimes I just like a good old fashion gun fight
well pilgrim they got what was coming to them... life can be tough but its a heck of a lot tougher if your stupid! Nice write little lady... Say, how did i end up in this picture?

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 6 Months Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

6 Months Ago

love the changes but for the flow and rhyme...
but my fast hand a little bit better. ?
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

6 Months Ago

thats Gary Cooper right?
Cherrie Palmer

6 Months Ago

Originally I liked the break in the cadence, but I think better is better.
Also I think t.. read more
Great two minute Western, Clint Eastwood would be proud,

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 6 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

6 Months Ago

Thank ya :)
[send message][befriend] Subscribe
DAH
A fine display of "fast at the draw".

Nicely played, love the detail
"Two .44s rip from leather"

And the ending is top shelf.

Bravo!



This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 6 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

6 Months Ago

Thank you, I always like doing these.
Zane Grey...Elmore Leonard...masters of the western, which I have always favoured. Your story sparked a scene from Once Upon a Time in the West when Charles Bronson faced down 3 gunmen and uttered the famous line..."you brought one horse too many"

Thanks for taking me back to dust and sagebrush. Much appreciated.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 6 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

6 Months Ago

That is one of my favorite lines ever, and I have a long list.
It's that moment when the vil.. read more
dear Cherrie.. it seems that in present times,
we are living the scenes in this poem.
Being afraid is an every day phenomenon.
A well penned warning that we need to cast votes
that make a difference in how we approach "the
right to bear arms". truly, Pat

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 6 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

6 Months Ago

Coming from a military / law enforcement background, I'm more of a conceal carry kinda gal.
read more
Sounds like what might have been running through Gary Cooper's head in High Noon.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 6 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

6 Months Ago

Love that show, and that's a good match for this.
A very entertaining read, Cherrie. You take us back to a time when a lawman had to settle the tension quickly or somebody died -- shooters or a hanging mob. I was taught there were only a very few such confrontations in the Old West. Walk 10 paces draw-and-fire duels were rare. Frontier honor was what the sheriff got if he survived, with no questions asked. The bad guy often shot from hiding -- as did the sheriff sometimes. Unlike movie shootouts, survival often meant who shot first -- running and shouting with guns blazing. Lots of good men lost their lives that way. Keep up the good work.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 6 Months Ago



First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

170 Views
11 Reviews
Rating
Added on August 11, 2019
Last Updated on August 22, 2019
Tags: western_gun fight

Author

Cherrie Palmer
Cherrie Palmer

Oakland, AR



About
I am a published poet and love poetry. My husband and I live near the White River, and love trout fishing. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: O.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Yearning Yearning

A Poem by barleygirl