Hidden

Hidden

A Poem by Cherrie Palmer
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Hidden

 

Your beauty shines, small white lie.

 

Give to me your time, you have nothing to lose but your life.

 

Run with me and we will fly, till my boredom wakes.

 

and the hidden  lie  springs into the light.

 

© 2020 Cherrie Palmer


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Mysterious and kind of horrifying...
Great work here.

Posted 2 Months Ago


I like that you can either read this as two separate things or words spoken mingled with inner dialogue.

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Posted 2 Months Ago


Ok this was chilling indeed Cherrie. Not sure I would like to meet the protagonist alone in a dark place. The shading was sort of effective and interesting.

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Posted 2 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

2 Months Ago

I have been wanting to play with this notion of hiding words. I may have to do it a time or too.
Cherrie Palmer

2 Months Ago

not everything I do works, but I like to air it out and give it a look.
Oh wow, This is really good, I can grasp these feelings well, nicely done

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Posted 2 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

2 Months Ago

this will be my Halloween poem this year :)
Just Kim

2 Months Ago

cool, that's really good.
LOVE! This is soooo creative! I love the snarky way the faded sentiments are like the REAL thoughts or feelings we try to keep hidden. This is SUCH an inventive way to show instead of tell. Also, I love the contrast between what's in black & what's in fading shades of gray! Bravo! And I'm glad to see you posting prolifically! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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Posted 2 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

2 Months Ago

My mind is on the move. I was not sure of the format. I'm glad you think it works.

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Cherrie Palmer
Cherrie Palmer

Oakland, AR



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I am a published poet and love poetry. My husband and I live near the White River, and love trout fishing. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: O.. more..

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