As A

As A

A Poem by Cherrie Palmer

The hungry cook begins to bake

As a sleeping child begins to wake.


A gifted artist loads some red

As a weeping saint counts the dead.


A violin tuned releases tears

As a hate filled man only sneers.


An empty soul needs some love

from the Master’s hand found above.


An adventures soul enjoys the climb

one clip at a time soaring high.


A needful soul with a poet’s hands, stir the

souls of both woman and man.


© 2020 Cherrie Palmer


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I watched the movie Schindler's List for the first time a few nights ago... maybe it's because it's still fresh on my mind, but this reminds me of that.
I see the peace...then chaos, then persecution and genocide that took place in those people's lives.
I see God seemingly standing so far away.. but also closer than anyone of them realizing.


Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Very interesting write here, I enjoyed this write

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Interesting piece of rhyming couplets As A seems to fade from stanza four onwards? But there are lots of very interesting images and suggestions that make us think that somewhere something else is happening.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Cherrie Palmer

3 Weeks Ago

I wanted it to have that, 'mean while, back on the ranch,' vibe. I'm glad it does.
John Alexander McFadyen

3 Weeks Ago

Ah I should have guessed lol!
To me, your poem is an artful, hopeful, & gentle rebuke of people's tendency lately to look at so much bad stuff going on & letting this fact define life for the entire year 2020 as if we should just throw this year away. Well, life is always full of both good & bad, so while we're perusing the bad, let's also remember to be cognizant of so much good that quiet little people are still making happen. Nicely uplifting poem! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Cherrie Palmer

3 Weeks Ago

I dreamed it up last night but didn't want to get out of the cozy warm bed, I was delighted I still .. read more
barleygirl

3 Weeks Ago

I am so jealous of anyone who can remember a poem overnight. I have a notebook by my bed & when I sc.. read more
Cherrie Palmer

3 Weeks Ago

I have tried the notebook too, and cant always make heads or tails from it. I'll repeat to myself ti.. read more

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Added on October 31, 2020
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Cherrie Palmer
Cherrie Palmer

Oakland, AR



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I am a published poet and love poetry. My husband and I live near the White River, and love trout fishing. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: O.. more..

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