Broken

Broken

A Poem by Cherrie Palmer
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someone make me stop :( so sad . A dollar for anyone who can guess this shape lol

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   .  -  .           .  -  .   

    bro       ·      ·     ken   

   no hope             to see  

 no love           to share

no friend         to care

no fire           to burn

no  sun     to  shine

no us    is  there

just  empty

a  i  r

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© 2020 Cherrie Palmer


Author's Note

Cherrie Palmer
with some help from Richard :)

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That Richard brings out the best in everyone...lol. Very cool, and so very dramatically sad. Not a place where I want to live, but have for sure at times.

Posted 3 Days Ago


Cherrie Palmer

2 Days Ago

That is so true. I had a sad looking little heart. Then, wa-la, Richard said try this:) and there ya.. read more
I once wrote a similar poem so down and out you wonder what's Life about.
Thanks for the share
Inspiration is sometimes so needed

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Posted 4 Days Ago


Cherrie Palmer

4 Days Ago

Happy to be of service, grab some paper. :)
Love the browkn heart shape, never seen anything like it! The shape makes up for the fact that this theme of a poem is sadly overused but you still did an excellent job on this theme! Deepest regards, Kay

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Posted 4 Days Ago


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Cherrie Palmer

4 Days Ago

Thank you Kay, it is a sad heart, Is there any wonder it's broken, lol. I agree with you that some .. read more
When we accept little. Easy to become empty and accept less. The roll of thoughts made the reader feel and understand the words dear Cherrie. Thank you for sharing the amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

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Posted 2 Weeks Ago


In the sadness, I see a horseshoe, which brings luck! I'm in no way a Positive Polly on most days, but I do believe in goodness to those who are genuine. Broken...it can be sad but also clouds break to reveal the sun...have a lovely rest of your weekend!

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Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Cherrie Palmer

2 Weeks Ago

:) what makes this poem so sad is that was supposed to be a broken heart.
thank you so muc.. read more
Nicole

2 Weeks Ago

I see it now! It was very creative!
so very well written, enjoyed the lay out of this write

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Posted 3 Weeks Ago


I like how the poem reflects itself...to me the shape is either an hour glass, or two tops posed against one another.
reminds me of my first divorce...i immediately missed my friend...even more so than the lover.
j.

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Posted 3 Weeks Ago



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Added on October 31, 2020
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Cherrie Palmer
Cherrie Palmer

Oakland, AR



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I am a published poet and love poetry. My husband and I live near the White River, and love trout fishing. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: O.. more..

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