Betwixt

Betwixt

A Poem by Cherrie Palmer

the sun shines brightly

as the moon stalls in the sky

betwixt them apath

© 2022 Cherrie Palmer


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Betwixt the two a path...
A slight break in form. But in spirit, a true haiku. Well written.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Cherrie Palmer

2 Weeks Ago

I switched it back to my 2nd choice. I'm not sure I like it better.
M. J. Smith

2 Weeks Ago

The line fits better formwise... Try this:
Between the Earth sleeps.
I don't know if i.. read more
What a strange word "betwixt" is. I often only hear it when someone uses the phrase "betwixt and between" which is also strange since it is an obvious redundancy. I'm reminded of a joke Robin Williams told. He said, if you look up redundant in the dictionary it says, "see redundant". Also I'm reminded of a song from the seventies, "Stuck in the middle with you." (smile) Love this haiku. Thanks for sharing. F.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Cherrie Palmer

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you :) I had fun creating this image.
Cherrie Palmer

2 Weeks Ago

I loved your input it's like the sprinkles on a cake.
what a lovely little write, I enjoyed this

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Cherrie Palmer

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much:)
A lovely piece
the sun and moon
together ..much love
and light betwixt the two
shining brightly..nice

Posted 1 Month Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Month Ago

Thank you Fran for the kind words of encouragement.
A path of light rays
Tripping lunar atmospheres
Binary links join

Posted 1 Month Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Month Ago

I do enjoy seeing the moon in the sky with the sun. It always inspires me.
Cherrie Palmer

1 Month Ago

I live your response to it very poetic indeed.
William Michael Reeves

1 Month Ago

Your piece had me thinking about a story by Isaac Asimov. The planet had 7 suns. Never setting but e.. read more
This is excellent. to me it is a metaphor that says when you love some one your hearts are never alone when you are apart

Posted 1 Month Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Month Ago

:) thank you
I edited this one tell me if you like it better.

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Added on December 10, 2021
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Cherrie Palmer
Cherrie Palmer

Oakland, AR



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I am a published poet and love poetry. My husband and I live near the White River, and love trout fishing. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: O.. more..

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