a writer's question

a writer's question

A Story by Cherrie Palmer
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think about your writing and give me one phrase you have penned more than once

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there is a writing program that can analyze  a story and predict who wrote it. Think about your own style and give me one line you have used more than once.

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"From the smell, you can always tell when human flesh is burning"

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Cherrie Palmer

2 Weeks Ago

Our middle son was a first responder to a plane crash that was engulfed. He's never been the same. .. read more
Patricia Wedel

2 Weeks Ago

"As the white-breasted Nut hatcher sat on the Bough of the Sycamore tree" would be a line used a ew .. read more
"Creamy white thighs"
"Cosmic Foil"
I have used those bits as well as quite a few others I cant think of at the moment. Good question...

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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Cherrie Palmer

2 Weeks Ago

Happy New Year
:)
We all do it. It would be interesting to know the things we use as .. read more
Has to be "I see you" in one way or another that pops up in my stuff often or some variation of it. Are you going to compose a poem based on all our lines?

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Cherrie Palmer

3 Weeks Ago

I am pretty good about not rewriting the same word over and over in a piece. However with that said .. read more
That's a tough one. I work so hard not to repeat. But I was just feeling that on something. Interesting you brought this up. Let me think....

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


The night was sultry - no, wait that was someone else.
The man put a sock in his pants...actually, no. Hmm?

Well my biggest problem is too many filler words. If I can learn to use less articles and 'be' words, I might be better in the future.

Check how many times you see a phrase start off with sometimes...in a review. I find myself doing that a lot too.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Cherrie Palmer

3 Weeks Ago

Yes I try hard to not reuse the same words but I do it too.
When evening drew the curtains. Used that in several short stories or something to that effect.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Cherrie Palmer

3 Weeks Ago

What a great line.
Fabian G. Franklin

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks. Merry Christmas!
Cherrie Palmer

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for playing along. I hope you had a Christmas filled with God's love today.
"it was a dark and stormy night"---no wait, that was Snoopy.

Oh, yes, that's right...I don't write stories....
so don't really have one...

except maybe this ...
ellipses

but "the day now spent" is good...although this day still goes on.

Merry Christmas, Cherrie,
j.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Cherrie Palmer

3 Weeks Ago

Merry Christmas Jacob
mine is... the day now spent...

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

3 Weeks Ago

Yours is what his is! That is something! Better collaborate

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Cherrie Palmer
Cherrie Palmer

Oakland, AR



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I am a published poet and love poetry. My husband and I live near the White River, and love trout fishing. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: O.. more..

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