The Brochure

Layaside your leaflet.
Pull your curtains back.
Take in all that is around you
never looking back.

Reviews

[Lorry]

I'll take two please, and can I book some sun loungers too? 😊

[Cherrie Palmer]

Two it's always better to go in the off season.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

It sounds like someone is going on holiday! I used to vacation on Ocracoke Island with just a few changes of clothes, a tent and some fishing gear. Everything moves slower and sweeter on the island. How I loved looking out my mosquito proof skylight at night to see the stars and the lighthouse beacon sweeping the sky and hear the ocean waves falling in the surf. It makes me wistful. I enjoyed your poem.

[Cherrie Palmer]

We live on bull shoals lake by the white river and spend a lot of time on the water.
That'll have to be holiday enough for the time being.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

That sounds heavenly.

[William Michael Reeves]

Feels like a counseling session has begun. You could be my poetic therapist. This was a fun little thing that you wrote with big ideas.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Lol once you open the curtains go ahead and vacuum.

[William Michael Reeves]

Reading your comment was a real chore!!!

[Cherrie Palmer]

Lol ya missed a spot

[William Michael Reeves]

I was going to be funny and review one of your older poems and say I got the spot but found emptiness where there should have been numbers of pages. Did you drop stuff or is it operator error on my part?

[Cherrie Palmer]

That is always a possibility

[William Michael Reeves]

I....
Looked back at a pamphlet
Of draperies pulled tight
And drew them open to their all
My future was quite a sight!

[writergurl]

what a wonderful little gem here, lovely written

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you dear :)

[JE Falcon]

A great new beginnings poem, Thanks for sharing.

[jennifer little]

great poem nice flow keep up the good work

[Cherrie Palmer]

:) Thank you so much

[jennifer little]

you are so very welcome

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Next stop...Heaven, but look out the window...
it's all starting to look like it.
j.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Please keep your arms inside until we come to a full stop.

[M. J. Smith]

Look up and see the clouds? Or maybe put down the phone and smell the coffee! Nice thoughts, Cherrie.

[Beckie]

Oh wow, This is so good and clever. Love this