Combined

Raindrop
And
Teardrop
Mingled
-As-
Clouds
And
Sorrows
Combined.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing dance of words and thoughts dear Cherrie. You create place and thoughts for the reader. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Cherrie Palmer]

Seemed perfect for a rainy day.
🙂 thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Cherrie.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I've always said it ought to be raining when they lay someone to rest. I like this. Tears are more like ocean than rain as both contain about the same amount of salt. But all rivers run to the sea eventually and the rain will meet them there.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you Fabian and yes the ebb and flow of the all waters coming together.

[Aura]

Wow I never thought of it like that. A tear drop shows a persons sorrows but a raindrop shows natures sadness. Intermingled it shows how much sadness is in this world. I enjoyed reading this!

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you Aura and yes the sorrows of nature and the sorrows of us overlap.

[Aura]

You are welcome. That is very true

[William Michael Reeves]

In just that little bit you can read a whole storm of thoughts into it. Might be weather storms here or storms of war there. I've been studying the types of parallelism and this gets some of that going. Interesting Cherrie.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Simple is always best. I also think the right combo makes a b impact. A poem might reflect a mood but usually it is only a reflection that pops in my mind.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and no one could tell I was crying....

[Cherrie Palmer]

Exactly :)

[Gee]

I hope that it rains on the day of my funeral so that all will have wet cheeks :))
A lovely wee piece Cherrie.
Hope you are well

[Cherrie Palmer]

:) All is well. I have my heart ❤️ shaped umbrella.

[Gee]

Hopefully neither will be broken any time soon :))

[Cherrie Palmer]

:) I'll drink to that slainte

[Gee]

I'll toast ya with Guinness and Jamesons, then nurse a next day sore head :)

[Cherrie Palmer]

That'll dry up the rain

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

I so love this image of sorrow painted in this evocative piece. It is such a haunting portrait. Wonderfully imaginative, Cherrie.

[Cherrie Palmer]

:) thank you
Not every day can be a blue bird day. Just popped in my head as I was dodging raindrops.

[Chris Shaw]

That surely is a cocktail of sadness Cherrie. Nice little piece of brevity. Happe Wednesday.

Chris

[Cherrie Palmer]

I know- rainy 🌧 day here seemed like a great combo :)

[Chris Shaw]

A blue cocktail. Hope the sun comes out soon :)