Playing with the winds

still the same 
still 
no shame

 

still climbing the tree
hoping to see you again 
hoping to share with you again

 

feels like a river dance 
sometimes the waves come crashing down on me 
cant breathe 
cant be with me 
cant be with you

 

then it calms down
the waters have mellowed 
and your still around
and im still so proud
of how beautiful we can be

 

dancing together 
our spirits ment to be 
together 
somtimes

not all the times 
and not for ever

 

but its so rare 
to have the love we share 
that I dont believe it true
so I mock it I mock you 
mocking me

 

but nothing stays the same 
the waves they do come 
they do go

but hopefully each time 
we will grow

a little more 
a little stonger 
a little bolder

 

united or apart

im glad we made a start 

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

dancing together
our spirits ment to be
together
somtimes

not all the times
and not for ever

but its so rare
to have the love we share
that I dont believe it true
so I mock it I mock you
mocking me

but nothing stays the same
the waves they do come
they do go

but hopefully each time
we will grow

a little more
a little stonger
a little bolder

united or apart

im glad we made a start


i feel bad even leaving the beginning verses off but this is the part that really resonated with me..

how lucky we can be to meet those special few that really matter in our lives.. fragile, to be sure... like snowflakes of communion melting slowly in our hearts..

:)

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

ohhh... this love had a near fatal ending for the writer... too sweet is no good sometimes , at least with this writer at that time ...
Thank you for your review :)

[Antonio Valentino]

you are very welcome...

yes all the tastes of lifes pallete need to be in balance dont they..

:)

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Great flow and theme, intensely romantic yet strongly honest. The last lines add a soothing resolve for hope in a future commitment.

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

:) Thank you x

[zainul]

Great vow of hope despite obstacles on the way.
Lovely realization:
"but nothing stays the same
the waves they do come
they do go
but hopefully each time
we will grow"

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

Thank you for your review :)

[zainul]

You are always welcome.