Extension

Extension,
But it asks so much
Of you,
Controls so
Much, out of
The blue...
Extension

For me it's
A hidden dimension,
An alien
Intention

...Extension...

Right above
high voltage
It says
Danger

Below your head
It says
Slippery when
Wet

Extension
Extension
Extension
Bury me
With your
Intention

Reviews

[Kleio13]

I honestly don`t know what else to say to this except that this is a dimensional piece itself. I love it.

[Zakari Schmidt]

Oh this is good! I like your use of extension/intention I'd totally do that..I found this poem aims outside of above or below and that's why I like it so much, awesome!

[Frontier]

Thanks Zach...outside of above or below, haha I like that.

[Zakari Schmidt]

Of course! Ha and I'm glad :) very cool piece indeed

[Ibreez Shabkhez]

You are building yourself up for a masterpiece. Do not miss it when it comes to you. Soon! This is nice stuff too.

"Thanks for stopping by" is a very distracted sort of comment.Something is gnawing at your cheerfulness: Dementors?

[Frontier]

Well I'm not sure what "dementors" are but I do enjoy this cryptic review...

[Ibreez Shabkhez]

http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Dementor

Try reading a few sometime.

[Ibreez Shabkhez]

Harry Potters

[Mark]

Some extensions are positive, even necessary, others, are what they are. Interesting perspective, nicely written.

Mark

[Frontier]

Thanks for stopping by :)

[Frontier]

Thanks for stopping by :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like this mteaphorically...extension....letting ourselves go, taking chances....but if the other's intention is cruel....and the voltage can electrocute our heart....do we take the chance anyway?

sometimes the risk is our own hidden dimension.

[Frontier]

thank you, Jacob :)

[Inda]

There's a lot of meat on this one, lots of layers. You may have to take it easy here and worry more about yourself and i love how you use intentions as a way of ahowing that "im trying to help you" etc, people pull is bs. Great one!

[Frontier]

hehe indeed, this was quite an interesting review, thanks

[Jessica Lynn Polley]

Seems like you are being spread thin because of everyone elses extensions and intentions and even if they are not meaning to it hurts. I really like the rhyme scheme and repetitive nature that really drives the point home. I enjoy all of you work and this poem is no exception. Great write!

[Frontier]

Thanks Jessica, I'm glad you enjoyed :)

[Frieda P]

I love your quirky intentions here Frontier, and the rhyme scheme is delightful....

[Frontier]

Thanks Frieda! Quirky indeed haha!

[Frieda P]

I love quirky, my pleasure! :)

[Cory Barrett]

I feel like the speaker is simply being asked to stretch too far. To compromise what they are worth for the better of someone else. I think at first i got lost in all the extension... .and then i reach intention. Intentions will always extend us.

[Frontier]

In a sense yes, thanks for your review :)