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A Poem by Frontier
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Wrote this when I was about to pass out.. just saw it while searching thru my phone and was a bit surprised.

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As your heart desires, 
Here I am
stuck and tired
A kid
that doesn't try to
follow the patterns 
on the floor
The pretty figurine
inside a crystal ball
with fake snow
surrounding it
I feel like the core
of the Earth 
and I'm watching the world 
slowly fall away
each time the sun
touches me more 
and more until
I'm burning

© 2014 Frontier


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I really like this. There's sort of a psychological layer underneath, whether it is a social anxiety thing I'm or not only you would know. Great poem though.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Frontier

6 Years Ago

thank you Tim :)
It seems that you were hovering between this world, and the next, found that sweet spot and imagined then composed quite a beautiful poem. I have done this before, tired and worn my mind found a surreal world then began to dwell there. Wonderful write! and oh, I tried to accept a friend request on your part (I think may have sent you one too) but for some reason it won't go through, anyway wanted to let you know I wasn't ignoring it:) I'll try again later, Mai

Posted 6 Years Ago


Frontier

6 Years Ago

Thanks Mai, and I accepted your friend request! :)
Jacob your poetry although eloquent and wonderfully constructed has such saddness to it. I feel for you for we both appear to be in a similar position. But soldier on we must.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Frontier

6 Years Ago

Yes indeed, thanks John.
John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

Sorry abot the 'Jacob' but I am so used to reviewing his work and must have read five or six of his .. read more
Beautiful piece. I can absolutely relate with the feeling of being stuck and tired and the effects it has on you. You put those feelings into a beautiful poem. Great work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Frontier

6 Years Ago

Thanks Jza :)
i can relate to this. been through some things lately....and ended up reacting physically....last week, dizziness, everything out of focus...couldn't clearly see someone standing right in front of me....physical effects from emotional and mental effects...

"falling away, being touched, burning" sadness turned to a spinning world"
like being tossed around in a crystalline ball.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Frontier

6 Years Ago

That sounds awful Jacob, hope you get better! :)
jacob erin-cilberto

6 Years Ago

already am getting there...

your words touched me.
I enjoyed the complete poem. Your statements honest and direct. You create places and thoughts we struggle with daily. I believe most of us question the unknown, our purpose and where we are ending? Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Frontier

6 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote :)
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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