My mere fate

My mere fate

A Poem by Frontier
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Another "found poem" using excerpts from Robinson Crusoe and the "Poetic Edda", oral Lit. from Iceland from 1000-1300 BC.

"
My mere fate
went from the isle
for her lover's flight. In this state
of life, that evil influence,
unmaly thy soul must seem,
so I pulled off my clothes
and took to the water,
old tales should ne'er be told 

© 2014 Frontier


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I liked the title and the story in the poetry. A perfect ending to a tale of fate. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


I would enter the water too!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frontier

4 Years Ago

;D;D;D;D;D;DD
paul sal.....

4 Years Ago

you singing?
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JC
interesting that you use bits from other things, kind of like a cut up method, is enjoyable to read your interpretation of the words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Frontier

6 Years Ago

Just trying out a new approach, thanks Jason
Ohh, secrets one must keep huh? Seems someone spoke out of turn ;)
Love this one, love it's sinplicity and the straightforwardness.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Frontier

6 Years Ago

thanks Inda!
That be a write fine me lady,blimey bloomin good!


100/100


Rossen

Posted 6 Years Ago


Frontier

6 Years Ago

Hahaha! I've always got time for a good ol' pirates tale ;)
Did you mean unmanly?
The last line made me smile and kinda warm :)
love the poem frontier :)
beautiful
-Sunya

Posted 6 Years Ago


Frontier

6 Years Ago

It's a word from the text. Thanks Sunya :)
paul sal.....

4 Years Ago

cannot find the definition
well this one goes for a lot of intepretation. i like it


Posted 6 Years Ago


Frontier

6 Years Ago

Thank you Sibusio! :)
amazing metaphors, you can think this from various point of views and make a beautiful story.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Frontier

6 Years Ago

thank again Mayank
I think I would prefer your words and your thoughts telling your story this time... you have a fresh way of expressing your "voice" and it deserves to be heard.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Someone I know once told me a story how at a beach party, fearing her boyfriend was interested in someone else, began to walk into the ocean. Her intention was never to return, but she also wanted him to notice. To save her. Claim her. He never did. It was a story I thought at the time the most beautiful, and sad I ever heard. It will always stick with me.

Your exquisite piece, reminded me of it.


Diego Paz

Posted 6 Years Ago


Frontier

6 Years Ago

Wow...thats truly an unfortunate story, so what happened to her?

Thanks
Tree

6 Years Ago

She was vague about the details, but what I gathered was this. She walked into the ocean until the w.. read more

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