Where is my mind?

          

             My Skull,                

Collapsing,    

Liquid is thrashing, 

Devouring my thoughts,

whole,

turned into a worthless soul,

Doc, tells me my brain,

only left to be insane,

      nothing left       

      

           

 

Reviews

[Pyyro]

Quite well done I say. The twist at the end, made it that much better. Keep up the dark path.

[Selena Calderon]

Thank you i'm still on the path of practicing ^-^