I'm Still Hanging On..

I'm Still Hanging On..

A Poem by FrikinFrancesca
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This poem represents my feelings towards my father, Even though he is gone. I love him and I am still hanging on.

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You're nothing but a dream now.
A image, A memory.
Appearing in my head.

I wear your picture in my locket.
Around my neck it lays.
The memories burn away at bay.
When your soul lived wild,
When I was but a child.

The laughter we shared.
Back when mom really cared.
Before the dark times,
You shined like a new dime.

I'll really never forget,
So, Let me speak my goodbyes,
of my one long regret.

© 2008 FrikinFrancesca


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Awwww i wanna hug you.
It's an amazing poem and i loved how you used the bay reference.
great work....I LOVE YOU

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aww Fran your gonna make me cry! :[[
This is an amazing piece. I can really feel what our feeling.
It's is very sad and personal which is very good, you had to get you feelings out somehow.
But all in all this is very very good.
love you fran!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a good write, but so sad. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Quite an emotional piece. I think you've captured your emotions well, giving the reader a taste of your inner self. Well done!

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Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow so sad very good write.

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