Uchiha Massacre

Uchiha Massacre

A Poem by Chidoriflower
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This is based on the Uchiha Massacre, from the manga and anime, Naruto.

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Blood stains tatami
Terror surges up his heart
Red eyes hypnotize 

© 2013 Chidoriflower


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quick fix.....remove "the" from line one.....then you'll have a true senryu (haiku is about nature) and by the way, i think it is superb!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chidoriflower

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :) I feel honored for you to review this!
The first one is 6 syllables . . .this is a haiku right? o.o

Posted 11 Years Ago


Catheryn

11 Years Ago

XD Lol. Its kay~ XD
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Akashi

11 Years Ago

Hi, my two best friends,
I am reviewing Uchiha Massacre for Chidoriflower,
I think that .. read more

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 Added on December 2, 2012
Last Updated on March 13, 2013

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Chidoriflower
Chidoriflower

R.I.P, CA



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I love reading, from YA books to classic English literature. Writing is my vent usually. I'm gay as hell. I like food, anime, videogames, and traditional dances. (Like waltzing, salsa, west/east coast.. more..

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