London Bridge Up in Flames

London Bridge Up in Flames

A Poem by Chidoriflower
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This is one stanza...I thought about this after watching Kuroshitsuji....

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London bridge is burning, is bursting in flames

Bodies pile and rot, while families flee

Washing away impurity, washed away in the Thames

The children are silent,while I drink my tea

My fairest lady, my dear lady, swim

The relatives no longer need your love

Swim until the moonlight grows dim

And the sardonic angels take you above

© 2013 Chidoriflower


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This is amazing! I love it!
And I see Akashi has thought of "The London Bridge it Falling Down" too xD
Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Chidoriflower

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :D
Bluefire

7 Years Ago

You're welcome! ^^
"London Bridges falling down, falling down, falling down- London Bridges falling down........" I love it , good job on this one. :D You made me laugh.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Chidoriflower

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!! (It wasn't supposed to be funny.) :)
Akashi

7 Years Ago

Oh. Well sorry.
Love it. Just amazing. ^_^

Posted 7 Years Ago


Chidoriflower

7 Years Ago

Hee hee hee. :) Thanks!! :D
treacherous waters have a way of drowning victims who are not strong enough to swim, this poem reminds me of the death or even suicide of a happy ending, sometimes, even the best things in life have a way of letting a person down,
great job on this!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Chidoriflower

8 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Swim until the moonlight grows dim
And the sardonic angels take you above.
My faves in this nice poem...:)


Posted 8 Years Ago


Chidoriflower

8 Years Ago

Thank you, thank you very much.
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

You are welcome. I'll visit from time to time...:)
I sense the agony of love grown cold. Love witheld. Woefull write. Well worded to carry the reader through a dark place. You have a nack for the darkness.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chidoriflower

8 Years Ago

Thank you, I appreciate your review.
VALORMORE DE PLUME

8 Years Ago

You are welcome. I have enjoyed all of your work. Look forward to reading more when time permits.

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Chidoriflower

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I love reading, from YA books to classic English literature. Writing is my vent usually. I'm gay as hell. I like food, anime, videogames, and traditional dances. (Like waltzing, salsa, west/east coast.. more..

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