Musings about Time

After reading about how time is relative, and in general reading about Einstein, I made this lil...thing

Time is fundamentally imaginary

Psychologically a reality

A rolling, smooth wave

Based on history, based on present

So many philosophies, so many experiments

The hands of the clock so stiff why can't the sway

Such a device to remind us of night and day

Ticking, stopping, and sometimes crowing

It's there and we hardly notice

Sometimes, sometimes

All the time

Thrown into chaos for one side

Organization into the other

What is your opinion?

What do you think?

 

Author's Note

Ignore the lack of fluidity and point of this I'm just kind of sleepy atm

Reviews

[Bluefire]

It flowed fine to me, more of a question, a thought sprung to life. I like it, you really have a gift.
Well done!

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you so much!!!! I missed you btw! Thank youuuu

[Bluefire]

You're welcome! I miss you too, buddy!

[DoormanDan]

I know the feeling of trying to write while sleepy. It's not easy, lol. You have a great vocabulary, and you exercise it wonderfully in this piece. If there is one thing I babsolutely love, it's the tick tock of a clock. Keep up the fantastic work! :)

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you very very much :)

[Brad P]

Beautifully written. Time is really just an agreed upon construct, designed by humans. We have become a slave to time.

[Chidoriflower]

Agreed and thank you for the review :3

[Coyote Poetry]

Time. Can't control her and we need her. Like a bad lover who tempt us to craziness. I like the days when time isn't counted. Just grasping the beauty of life and the day. I enjoyed the poem. Left the reader with a lot to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you for the review, Coyote. It's much appreciated. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.