Death is in me

Death is in me

A Poem by Chinnah!
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I was mad when i wrote this

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When I feel like hell
I just wanna kill myself
The people that I care for the most
End up killing me more
The judging and laughing
Just make me start crying
They don't seem to care
So I get hurt even more
I sit in the darkness alone
With only one light of hope
The light of God
That has kept me alive
A rush of electricity
To get away from this life
I just wanna scream "HELP!"
To get through my whole life

© 2011 Chinnah!


Author's Note

Chinnah!
this is how i feel most of the time when i get mad

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This is so sweet. I don't believe in God but, it really does make me smile when people turn to god and feel better. I admire the belief and trust that things will be OK and something that makes you feel better is worth keeping.

Posted 11 Years Ago


its good to know that you still have god, its a blessing actually that made you stronger...

Posted 12 Years Ago


You say truly and I empathise with every word you say here. We could go as far as miles writing on a roll of paper the causes, the reasons, what is love and what is hate, and above all if it is really worth it.

Maybe sometimes the best thing is to get angry, to get mad and get it out of you at any cost. I hate to say that life is like this; I hate using that expression and make an excuse for everything that is just wrong, so damn wrong. But sometimes we have to accept that the roll just keeps on rolling out. And every new page, just as it brings something fresh and new, is a continuation of something that came before it. .

A pretty lie, don't you think? Maybe Sponge Bob has got the answer after all, somewhere out it will come one day. And you'll feel like you won the lottery! Maybe it is just a matter of waiting. .

Posted 12 Years Ago


great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great poem :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


thanx everyone for your honest reviews it really helps me believe in myself a little more :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sad,powerful and intense....a great poem!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is sad and I can really relate to this.
I love the emotion put into this.
Very well written
~Amai

Posted 12 Years Ago


A lot can relate, power surge of honest and raw emotion love! xoxo

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow that is intense!
I love the raw emotion in it.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Chinnah!
Chinnah!

Pasco, WA



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Hi im Rocio AKA Chinnah.... I love Unicorns, Spongebob, and im a music addict add me if you want a weird friend haha jk... if you ever wanna talk just message me ill be all ears.... i love writting .. more..

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