Hope

Look at me

What do you see?

Nothing right?

Now look at my arms

What do you see?

Dried blood and scars

Look in me

You'll see sadness, anger,

Lost hope and pain.

Do you see it?

Now all I have to tell you is...

HELP!!! I can't take this much longer!

I need you, I feel like I'm dying inside of here!

What do I see in you? I see...

A better life than mine, peace,

Found hope, and happiness

If I look in your heart

I see that you haven't had a good life

That you've been through a lot,

And that your heart is still healing

Your eyes they have a thousand tears,

They have a worried look,

And they see a light of found hope

Now you tell me to keep living

And that I will win my hope back

Author's Note

"Don't ever look into the eyes of darkness always search for the brightest ones and you'll find hope again, with dark you'll just end up with Lost Hope" - Chinnah!

Reviews

[Chris]

As a comment: We are allowed to be confused - its one b***h of a world... but we "deal" as best we can AND day-to-day. Hope is where and as we find it.

As a review: Good flow and thought... good language use. A rhythm that keeps the listener - listening.

Chris

[nathan]

Yeeah! Finally! And this is even better than the last