good morning

a poem

wake up, wake up,
get up, get up,
morning is coming
day is flying

wake up, wake up,
get up, get up,
coffee's warm
fresh from the farm

wake up, wake up,
get up, get up,
birds are singing
hope is ringing

wake up, wake up,
get up, get up,
sun is rising
so hypnotizing

wake up, wake up,
get up, get up,
life is waiting
time to change the world

Author's Note

even though i wrote this at 12:31 am, this still makes me happy!

Reviews

[Vera]

The repetition was nice and I was singing this in my head as I read it. It is very happy and invigorating. Good job and keep writing! :)

[Aarea]

I can just imagine my mom singing this to me at 6:30 a.m. I can even hear it in her voice. GO AWAY MOM I WANT TO SLEEP!!! No jk. This was a great poem, you can definitely tell you were happy when you wrote it. :) I really liked the last line.

[chloe]

thanks! im really glad you liked it! im personally not a morning person myself, but it reminds me of my mom who is, so i wrote it!

[Lydia Shutter]

Filled with happiness and hope. Such an uplifting write. Adorable! Lydi**

[Healing Star]

thanks, I am up now. I love this, very happy, Good Morning!