Hurting

Hurting

A Poem by Chloe Solomon
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A short poem I wrote the other day

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I just wanna scream
I just wanna shout
I just wanna let all these thoughts out
I want you to hurt
I want you to burn
I want you to feel just like I do

© 2013 Chloe Solomon


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Not bad, and the lyrical quality of this is a nice touch. It is a tad short, however, and the brevity isn't exactly the sort that works for this. I think you ought to expand this - what you have currently would be a good first stanza.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chloe Solomon

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, and I agree 100% about the length thing.
Michael Corkill

7 Years Ago

I agree that this work is short. However I think it is a great start. Writing began for me purely as.. read more

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Added on March 21, 2013
Last Updated on March 21, 2013
Tags: Love, Pain, Hurt, Burn, Jealous, scream, shout

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Chloe Solomon
Chloe Solomon

Melrose , MA



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Hello, my name is Chloe Solomon. I am 14 and live in eastern Ma. Writing is my passion and I'm hoping with the help of your constructive criticism I can better my skills and become a professional writ.. more..

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