A Poem by Choco

Overtaken by the lust of it all; step back shaken from the height of the fall

no knees to hold strong; cant cave now what if the feeling is wrong

jump back safe; feet cant move standing in the same place

cant move on; do something quick before the reciprication is gone

heart beats fast; someday you gota fly even if you're scared to crash

two become one; praying from a day when seed and egg create a son

sun rise sun set; time passes quickly how soon we regret

in the wise trust; when you're overtake make sure its love not lust

© 2008 Choco

Author's Note

i often wonder if im the only one who still beleives in true love, though i am a romantic i am in no way hopeless. Just remeber look for the things that last and not the things that pass......

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this is a beautiful sentiment...

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very true, and well spoken.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on November 17, 2008



Dallas, TX

Im Choco, Ive always like to write; poetry, short stories, whatever. Some people have told me that I have talent but what does that mean right, they're my friends. Anyway I would apreciate any feedbac.. more..

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