Shades of Green

Shades of Green

A Poem by ChocolateAddict

bountiful bliss
vibrant and warm
pastures
meadows
alive and clean
swirling scent

delightful depth
bright and sweet
eyes
Oh!
Your eyes!
mesmerizing and bold
glittering gaze

© 2012 ChocolateAddict


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simple yet bold

Posted 7 Years Ago


The rush of being smitten is like being dizzy with imagery and senses. I at first found myself looking for rhymes been then a paid attention to the meter and realized it was self contained. The thought conveyed is strong and complex in depth.

Posted 7 Years Ago


LOVE IT!!

and its really cool how its actually green ahaha

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on April 8, 2012
Last Updated on April 8, 2012
Tags: green, color, eyes, senses

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Married, mother of two. Has ongoing love affair with chocolate. Flirty, funny and frank. May also be grumpy or gabby. Mostly known for sarcasm and a love for cats. Weaknesses include but are not.. more..

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A Poem by ChocolateAddict