Good Morning

Good Morning

A Poem by The Pain Stays Fresh

I wake to the sound
of chirping birds outside my window.
Such a happy sound.
It brightens my day and puts a spring in my step.
The sun is shining
as if to say "Have a happy day, today."

© 2012 The Pain Stays Fresh

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Amazing, that's a very vivid, and pleasant, image, it makes me come back in my mind to the time when i used to live in Rio, every morning was pretty much like that :)
Great job !

Posted 7 Years Ago

I love the whole view of the poem good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago

Great poem to start well the day. Made me smile.

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Good tone, flow, and rhythm.

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is such a wonderful light read. Amazing

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on June 14, 2012
Last Updated on June 14, 2012
Tags: morning, poetry


The Pain Stays Fresh
The Pain Stays Fresh

Alma, AR

I'm a total black sheep. I love reading, writing, talking, music older than I am, and watching old westerns on rainy days. I prefer writing stories and short poetry. You'd think by reading some of my.. more..


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