Sharon

Sharon

A Poem by Chris Yip
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A "Nobody's heartbreak love for "Beauty"

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                                             Sharon

                                         

                                            Oh Sharon

                                         

                                    How I loved you so

   

                                   You will never know

                                  

                                   How you hurt me so

                               

                         Why did you come into my life?

                               

                                     I will never know

                           

                          I tried my best to avoid you so

                

              But my suffering seemed to make you thrive

                

                       Why couldn’t you leave me alone?

               

                     You were the Angel I could not have

               

                 Because my whole world was like a cave

            

                  Oh, how I longed for you day and night

          

                             Your loveliness and charm

        

                                       I could not fight

                  

                             I confessed my love for you

             

                                     That fateful night

                

                                   But you rejected me

                

                                   With all your might

                

                                            You said

                   

                                     I wasn’t first best

               

                              Neither was I second best

               

                              Nor was I even third best

                

                             That was all you could say

                 

                                  At the end of the day

             

                           You walked out of the room

              

                                     Leaving me alone

               

                            All my hopes were dashed

         

                             With your words so brash

         

                           Cutting my heart like a knife

         

                                          Oh, Sharon

           

                          I really wanted you for a wife!

                                   

                  

                   

                                    

                               

                                  

© 2012 Chris Yip


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Chris Yip
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If the picture is of the woman? I would be very sad also. I like the way you told the story of the love affair gone wrong. Woman can lead us to paradise and hell in the same minute. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
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good emotions. well done

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i loved it

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You have my Condolences

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That was really nice, I liked the last lines a lot. Your way of expressing emotions is excellent. Great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Very heart-breaking, it is rare to find a poem like such coming from a male perspective. It is true that men can be very emotional at times. You continue to surprise me with your writing that is so unique from others.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very tragic. also lyrical. i can picture this being sung while strumming on a guitar.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Ain't that the story of a billion love-clawed hearts. We can be astonishingly cruel in our relations with others, ruthlessly so. Ach, the smug arrogance of beauty. I am sure it breeds hate in many cases, certainly resentment. You nailed how things often are here.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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As Angie has spoken down below, you have done an amazing job of conveying emotions on this piece. I really love the way you portrayed the story of a lovelife gone wrong; storytelling at its finest. It is quite interesting how one person could mean so much, yet never remain yours, isn't it? Oh well, it is just a feeling that many people have to cope with.
Amazing job once again.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If the picture is of the woman? I would be very sad also. I like the way you told the story of the love affair gone wrong. Woman can lead us to paradise and hell in the same minute. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a good write. You did a nice job on conveying emotions on this poem. I loved the flow and the rhythm. Thanks for sharing.

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I'm an Interior designer but involved in sales and marketing of construction chemical products now. My experience in writing is limited and this unfinished novel that i am writing now is my first real.. more..

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