Different kind of love

Different kind of love

A Poem by Christie Dupuis
"

... It was

"
It was a different kind of love she felt
She felt it in whole body not just her heart.
She felt it in her soul.
It made her better not bitter.
Even if she wasn't with him she felt it.
It was like her soul was dancing with the music of the sound of his voice.
One look in his eyes made her melt.
It was like her whole body turn into a puddle.
It made her realize that she didn't want anyone else.
Oh she thought a few times she would die without others she been with.
But this was a different kind of love she felt .
It made her sick cause all the love she felt.
It was like her soul reaching out, grabbing him pulling her told him.
She thought she gone mad but all she felt was a different kind of love.
Was she scared because she loved him to much.
She didn't think she deserved this kind of feeling.
Not knowing she would hurt him.
She started pushing him away.
But she knew it would hurt her also.
She wished she could of showed him and of showed herself.
But she so scared and doesn't think she deserved love or happiness.
Now she hates herself for pushing away the things that made better.
A reflection of herself she sees is the mirror she could never love.
She just wanted to ease her pain away so she smiled till the day she lost who she was.
It was a different kind of love.

© 2014 Christie Dupuis


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good imagery poem keep it going, i like when you try express the feeling with parable or things that easily to be convey

Posted 5 Years Ago


Amazing poem keep them coming

Posted 5 Years Ago


Ive been throught the same.. it is amazing ..
well done :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


"She wished she could of showed him and of showed herself.
But she so scared and doesn't think she deserved love or happiness. "
This is true and real poetry. I had bad luck. I found woman healing and wanting little in my single days. I believe a woman decide when she need a relationship or not. If you come when a woman is hiding her heart. You have to wait for her mind to change. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


I've been through this. vry lovely.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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