And in one cold embrace....

On his bed he lay

Trying hard to sleep

Tossing and turning restlessly

For his mind is not at ease

Ouestions of tomorrow

Thoughts of yearterday

And with a heart full of sorrow

One's soul can easily stray

But his worries cease

As he hears a whispher

His mind is at ease

For he knows it's her

She calls his name

He tries to ignore

But the feeling's the same

It hurts to the core

Wounds heal

But scars remain

Sometimes the pain's too real

Can drive one insane

His soul is at peace

As he finally accepts

His pain starts to decrease

And he falls asleep

As she crawls into bed

And in one cold embrace

He's happy

Even though she's dead

Reviews

[Brittany Zedalis]

Well that had a sad ending. This flows really nicely though. Good job.

[katnisscat]

The rhythm and the rhyme all flows together in one glorious master piece. I really love this piece and I'm putting this in my favorites! You portray longing amazingly well! I love this!

[Christopher Paul]

Thank you so much. Really happy you liked it...

[Rose Diamond]

I really liked this, especially that twist at the end! Good job!

[Christopher Paul]

Thank you....

[Nativespirit]

Can certainly related to the, "wounds heal, scars remain. The pain's too real, drives you insane." Thanks for sharing.

[Christopher Paul]

Thank you and your most welcome...