I love you as you are

I love you as you are

A Poem by Chris38
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Jealousy and insecurity are terrible things

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I love you as you are! You're perfect!
Don't you think though that blonde would suit you better?
Of course not! I love you as you are!
Don't you think you  should lose a bit of weight?
No Pressure! I love you as you are!
Have you ever though of a bit of work on your face, your nose perhaps?
No I don't mean anything by it! I love you as you are!
Don't you think something could be done with your cheekbones?
Only if you want of course! I love you as you are!
What about your lips. Perhaps something could be done there?
Of course there's nothing wrong! I love you as you are!
Don't you think that accent's a bit common?
No only joking! I love you as you are!
Are you sure you should  go out in that skirt? Men will all be looking at you!
Of course you can wear what you want! I love you as you are!
 You spend too much time with the  men from work? They might get the wrong idea!
Yes I know their your friends! It's fine! You know I love you as you are!
Do you have to flirt so much with them? You're with me not them!
Of course you flirt! Do you think i'm stupid?
I'M not trying to mould you into anything! If you loved me you'd want to please me!

© 2011 Chris38


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Interesting and a great ironic twist, something I'm fond of in writing. Keep up the good work

Posted 12 Years Ago


You're so kind and loving

Posted 12 Years Ago


I loved the ending of this one Sweetie, I am still laughing..lol and God bless..Kathie

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Chris38
Chris38

Liverpool, North west England, United Kingdom



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I am 38 years old and work in the care industry with adults with learning difficulties. I have been writing on and off since I was six years old. I had some stuff published when I was in my teens but .. more..

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