Within

Writing is my invitation to come and see what I see

        

 

What can I say

That's not been said

Or do that's not been done

What road is there

Still untraversed

What race that's still unrun

 

And where is there

A virgin land

Where no one else has been

Where is that place

That untouched world

Whose sights remain unseen

 

I know of only

One such place

Which I alone can find

And none but me

Can claim to see

The world within my mind.

Reviews

[John McGrael]

dude....

my contest has 5 places....
... this is down to the final 6

i HATE IT man, but i gotta take off this poem, i just randomly picked which one i would take off and urs got picked

im sorry
but please know this poem is very inspiring and i really hate that i have to kick it off
but i do man, SORRY!!

[Emily B]

kinda like where the wild things are, just more grown up . . . I like it

[Nathan Noble]

great flow and creativity. this was an awesome write.

[Jenny Ge]

Your poem rocked. The rhythm and rhyming were in sync, and the stanzas were unique.
Great job!