Kiss me Goodnight

Kiss me Goodnight

A Poem by Laconic Meraki

One kiss and my heart is in flight.
I'm the damsel and you are my knight.
I'd run to you at any speed -climb any mountain to see you smile;
No matter the heights or the miles.
In your dark times, I'll be your light.
This love is similar to a fairytale.
My soul with you SAILS.
We are untameable- a flower that grows wild.
A rose with thorns yet so devine.
We are heaven and hell combined.

Always kiss me Goodnight my handsome knight..

© 2019 Laconic Meraki


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mmmmmmmmm like first love's innocence ... with a touch of reality "We are heaven and hell combined."
closing line contains a whole lot of wisdom ... i read in the Bible the advice in Ephesians 4:26 "Do not let the sun go down on our anger?" ... a fine path to follow especially in a committed relationship says i! nice poem ma'am!
E.


Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Laconic Meraki

4 Years Ago

Don't do it.. Breath and Let it go
Maxwell Ryder

4 Years Ago

Can’t.Too stubborn. Makes the love spicier to keep it a week.
Laconic Meraki

3 Years Ago

I can't relate...



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Our mind has a way of finding that our heart notices an other... and sometimes they even notice us as well. But again, sometimes, that other never does notice ...us.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



... Well if that aint love, I dont know what is .... I imagine there is a very lucky fella out there somewhere ..

... Neville :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laconic Meraki

3 Years Ago

If only.
If only he would have felt that way.
If only he would have appreciated me.
Neville

3 Years Ago


... the world is full of what if's .. more deadly than plastics and lots of other deadly thi.. read more
Laconic Meraki

3 Years Ago

Ya reckon?
Softly spoken, energetically written. A fairy-tale love comes alive and fills the space. Very enjoyable write. Pen on...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"In your dark times, I'll be your light.
This love is similar to a fairytale.
My soul with you SAILS."

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

I did. That is why I quoted...
Laconic Meraki

3 Years Ago

Ok , Just wasn't sure your views or opinion on it. Im open to any critism.☺
Thank you tho.. read more
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

You are welcome. Thank you for the friend request
Someone sounds smitten! :)
Hopefully he doesn't run at the first sign of a real dragon.
Although...
Even fools in foil armor may still bear the best of intentions.
And even Don Quixote had his Dulcinea.

Lovely poem. Hopelessly romantic. I approve wholeheartedly.
Just avoid windmills, you'll be fine.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laconic Meraki

3 Years Ago

Oh. He was nowhere near a "knight".
Night.. Like dark maybe.
Left me right there. read more
Dripping Chocolate Madness

3 Years Ago

Good :) standing back up, taller than you were when you fell, is cathartic and healing.
I fin.. read more
Laconic Meraki

3 Years Ago

See, together we fought his demons.
I completely put him first.
Forgetting that I had.. read more
Love is an adventure and it seems these two are living it.
Very romantic!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laconic Meraki

3 Years Ago

Turns out she was blinded.
He was just an idiot with a mask made of tin foil lol.
Papaya

3 Years Ago

Well, at least he's wearing a mask. :)
I loved this poem Christa, very cleverly written. Well done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laconic Meraki

3 Years Ago

Thank you for reading. ☺
love the title. It says it all. No matter what happens during the day, good times, bad times, love shines and the bond doesn’t break. The kiss goodnight says it all. Beautifully expressed.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ladysue

3 Years Ago

That’s the best kind..:)
Laconic Meraki

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the review. And kind words.🤞
Ladysue

3 Years Ago

Your welcome.. 🙂
I enjoyed reading this very much. Your rhymes are spot on, your emotional tone glides along consistently from line to line, and you have good spelling and grammar which is tops with me.

Nicely done, Christa. :-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is great poetry. Runs deep and smooth. though has its irony.

Very good.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laconic Meraki

3 Years Ago

Thank you for the feedback !🙏
Laconic Meraki

3 Years Ago

Thank you for the feedback !🙏

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Added on August 23, 2019
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