Potion

Potion

A Poem by Christa Raelyn

Again,we are going through the motions.
Under your spell; ingested your potion.
Intense rollercoaster drowning in emotion.
Soul full of heart and pain.
I know that you've been through the same.
Walking in the thunder...Dancing in the rain.

© 2019 Christa Raelyn


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two sides of the same coin .. smart rhyming says i .. creative title and use of it in your poem .. especially appreciate your characters knowing the spell, the ride and the pain .. for both .. i see them as staying together through it all .. i like the minimalism .. very complete scenario with few words .. nice one!
E.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christa Raelyn

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much. 👑



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Such a wonderful write here, this is beautiful

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christa Raelyn

4 Months Ago

Thank you SO much! 😘
great little poem, can't beat walking in the thunder, dancing in the rain,

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christa Raelyn

4 Months Ago

It sure seems to take away my stress. 🖤
two sides of the same coin .. smart rhyming says i .. creative title and use of it in your poem .. especially appreciate your characters knowing the spell, the ride and the pain .. for both .. i see them as staying together through it all .. i like the minimalism .. very complete scenario with few words .. nice one!
E.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christa Raelyn

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much. 👑

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Added on August 23, 2019
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